Behind the Scene: Chapter Three of Wrongful Accusations

Writing Complex Interactions

In Chapter Three of Wrongful Accusations, Sassy dives deeper into the case by interviewing Pearce Clayton, Shannon’s devoted boyfriend. This chapter explores the dynamics between Sassy and her suspects while blending humor and personal reflections to make the story feel grounded and relatable.

Here’s an excerpt:

“How well did you know Mr. Bendele?” I watched Pearce closely to gauge his response.

“I just knew him in passing. We never really had a conversation. I said hello when he came over and goodbye when he left. I never felt comfortable around the guy.”

“Why was that? Did he seem resentful of you being with his baby’s momma?”

“No, I don’t think he paid much attention to me. I just didn’t like how he talked to Shannon. It took everything in me not to knock him on his ass... Excuse me, Sassy, that guy just does—did something to me.”

How I Came Up with This Scene

This chapter serves multiple purposes:

1. Build Suspense: Pearce’s quiet devotion to Shannon raises the question—how far would he go to protect her? His veiled hostility toward Joshua hints at deeper emotions and possible motives.

2. Layer the Investigation: Sassy’s interaction with Pearce gives her (and readers) potential leads to explore, like verifying his alibi and understanding Shannon’s history with Joshua.

3. Infuse Personal Reflection: Sassy’s self-aware humor about her personal life (like her thoughts on marriage and her dodging Neil the Neighbor) adds levity while deepening her character.

When planning this chapter, I wanted to blend the intensity of the case with Sassy’s everyday struggles, like dodging unwanted attention and grappling with her complicated feelings about Jerry. This contrast keeps the tone balanced and relatable.

Writing Takeaway

To craft scenes that balance investigation with personal moments:

1. Use Dialogue to Uncover Clues: Pearce’s words—and his silences—reveal his devotion to Shannon and his unease about Joshua. Dialogue can show more than it tells, especially in mysteries.

2. Give Characters Dual Purposes: Pearce isn’t just a suspect; he’s also a window into Shannon’s life, adding complexity to their relationship and making readers question his role.

3. Weave in Personal Subplots: Sassy’s personal life (Neil, Jerry, Aunt Essie) adds dimension to her character, showing that she’s more than just a detective.

Try It Yourself

Think about your story’s secondary characters. Are they serving more than one purpose? Can they reveal clues while also adding depth to the protagonist’s world?

I’d love to hear how you approach balancing plot and character moments in your stories. Hit reply and share your thoughts!

Until next time,
Susie

“Continue writing with purpose”

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P.S. Catch up on all chapters of Wrongful Accusations here.

P.P.S. Check out the other breakdowns here.