Behind the Scenes: Chapter Eleven of Wrongful Accusations

Writing High Stakes, High Drama, and Surprise Reveals

In Chapter Eleven of Wrongful Accusations, everything Sassy suspected finally clicks into place—but just a little too late. The housekeeper, Kadijah (a.k.a. Hinniyah Muhammad), turns out to be more than a domestic helper. She’s the wife of the murdered man... and now she’s vanished.

Here’s a quick excerpt that sets the tone:

“Sassy, unless they just don’t have any living room furniture, I think they’ve moved.”

“Moved?” I said, trying to hustle out of the car.

This chapter is full of twists, and it was fun to write because everything from earlier chapters starts to unravel into bigger questions.

Here’s Why This Chapter Works

1. The Suspect Becomes a Fugitive
   Kadijah went from loyal housekeeper to prime suspect in a matter of moments. By making her close to both Shannon and the victim, the betrayal hits even harder—and gives us one of the strongest motives so far.
   

2. Sassy’s Classic Voice Carries the Scene
   Sassy’s sharp wit and sarcastic banter, especially with Cole Slaw, keeps the tone from getting too heavy—even as the tension builds.
   

“Don’t rush me, gal, I’m thinking… I need you to chase and tackle Mrs. Muhammad if she tries to get lost.”

3. A Sudden Exit Raises the Stakes
   Kadijah’s mysterious overnight departure adds urgency. Now Sassy’s not just solving a murder—she’s chasing a fugitive with secrets and plenty of motive.
   

Writing Takeaway

If you’re writing a mystery or thriller, here are some elements to consider:

• A Reveal That Reframes the Story: Kadijah being the victim’s wife changes everything—every interaction is now seen in a different light.
  

• Make Exits Matter: A character disappearing suddenly can be more powerful than a dramatic death. It implies guilt, adds suspense, and keeps the reader guessing.
  

• Lean Into the Unlikely Helpers: Sassy’s friendship with Cole Slaw brings heart and humor to high-pressure scenes—and adds backup when the going gets tough.
  

Try It Yourself
If one of your characters had a secret that completely shifted the story, what would it be? How would their sudden exit impact your protagonist—and the pace of your story?

As always, I’d love to hear what you’re working on. Do you enjoy writing twists like this? Hit reply and let me know.

Until next time,
Susie

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P.S. Catch up on all chapters of Wrongful Accusations here.

P.P.S. Check out the other breakdowns here.