Behind the Scenes: Chapter Four of Wrongful Accusations
Writing Side Characters That Steal the Show
In Chapter Four of Wrongful Accusations, Sassy’s world expands with new characters—some that challenge her, some that support her, and at least one who lands herself a job. This chapter highlights the importance of side characters in shaping a story’s tone and depth.
Here’s an excerpt:
“Do you need somebody to help you with all this filing? I don’t see how you're not scratching yourself silly from paper mites.”
I realized that I loved Ms. Alma.
“Can you start Monday?”
How I Came Up with This Scene
This chapter had a few important jobs:
Introduce a Memorable Side Character: Ms. Alma Jackson is blunt, unfiltered, and hilarious. Her presence adds warmth and comic relief, making her stand out while still serving the plot.
Deepen the Investigation: Through Ms. Alma’s perspective, Sassy gains insight into the victim, Joshua Bendele, and his interactions with the people around him.
Show Sassy’s Inner World: From her complicated relationship with her mother to the quiet vulnerability she shares with Aunt Essie, this chapter reminds us that even strong protagonists have personal struggles.
I wanted Ms. Alma’s introduction to be entertaining but also meaningful. Readers connect with characters who feel real, and sometimes the most unexpected people—like a no-nonsense babysitter—can become integral to both the plot and the main character’s development.
Writing Takeaway
To write strong side characters that enhance your story:
Give Them a Distinct Voice: Ms. Alma’s casual and humorous way of speaking sets her apart immediately. Each character should sound unique in their dialogue and attitude.
Make Them Matter to the Plot: Even though she’s funny, Ms. Alma isn’t just there for laughs—she provides key information about the case and even ends up working for Sassy.
Use Side Characters to Reveal the Protagonist’s Traits: Sassy’s relationship with Aunt Essie, her sharp but reluctant kindness toward her mother, and her instant appreciation for Ms. Alma all show different sides of her personality.
Try It Yourself
Think about your own writing. Are your side characters doing more than filling space? Are they shaping the story, influencing your protagonist, or giving readers something memorable?
I’d love to hear your thoughts! What’s a side character from a book or movie that stuck with you?
Until next time,
Susie
P.S. Catch up on all chapters of Wrongful Accusations here.
P.P.S. Check out the other breakdowns here.