Behind the Scenes: Chapter Ten of Wrongful Accusations
Writing Authentic Family Dynamics
In Chapter Ten of Wrongful Accusations, Sassy takes a much-needed break from her case and spends time with Aunt Essie—one of the most influential people in her life. What starts as a simple home-cooked meal turns into a conversation about purpose, protection, and an unexpected nudge toward her next move in the case.
Here’s an excerpt:
“Sandra, I’m worried about you. Why don’t you quit your job and then we can start this tutoring venture together?”
“Professor, why would I do that? I didn’t get hurt in the line of duty; I was out riding my bike, minding my own business when my neighbor’s obsession with me went up to a criminal level.”
“But you work on these terrible cases, looking for murderers. What would you do if one of these people decided to come after you?”
“Aunt Essie, relax, I’ve got this under control.”
How I Came Up with This Scene
This chapter was all about balance. Here’s why it works:
Showing a Different Side of Sassy: We’re used to seeing her tough, sarcastic, and independent, but here we see her vulnerable—leaning on the one person who has always had her back.
A Break from the Case That Still Moves the Story Forward: While she’s resting, she’s also strategizing. Her conversation with Aunt Essie ultimately helps her decide to confront Mrs. Muhammad—a crucial next step.
Aunt Essie as a Voice of Reason: Every detective, no matter how fearless, needs someone to question their choices. Aunt Essie’s concerns add depth to the stakes—reminding readers that Sassy’s work is dangerous and not everyone thinks she should continue.
This chapter reminds us that solving mysteries isn’t just about piecing together clues—it’s about the people in the protagonist’s life who challenge them, care for them, and sometimes push them in the right direction.
Writing Takeaway
If you want to create rich, layered characters:
Give Them Personal Relationships That Challenge Their Views: Aunt Essie wants Sassy to quit investigating—this creates an internal struggle that makes the story more compelling.
Use “Break” Scenes to Reveal Character: A home-cooked meal and a casual conversation seem like downtime, but they reveal more about Sassy’s fears, her need for family, and her next move.
Mix Humor with Serious Moments: The banter between Sassy and Aunt Essie keeps the chapter light, even as it touches on deep themes like safety, career choices, and unresolved family relationships.
Try It Yourself
Think about your protagonist. Do they have someone in their life who challenges them? Can you use a moment of rest to deepen the story and reveal something new?
I’d love to hear how you develop character relationships in your writing! Hit reply and let me know.
Until next time,
Susie
P.S. Catch up on all chapters of Wrongful Accusations here.
P.P.S. Check out the other breakdowns here.